Upstairs Gallery children’s animations on the BIG SCREEN !

This looks amazing!

 

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We are proud to present the Upstairs Gallery children’s animations on the BIG SCREEN ! Come along and be WOWED by their creativity and animation skills taught at the recent WORD CIRCUS workshop, run by Martin Sercombe.

Where: Flicks Cinema, (basement of Lopdell House)
When : Thursday 8th September
Time : 7.30pm

BOOKINGS ARE ESSENTIAL

Please email: gallery@upstairs.org.nz

or call on 09 817 4278 to confirm your seat.

IBBY International Congress 2016 in Auckland- a very special event


 

 

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IBBY is the International Board for Books for Young People and has very noteworthy aims. Chiefly IBBY believes it is the right of all children to hold a book and read regardless of their status (gender, economic, ability, ethnicity, disability and so on).

Around 500 delegates from over 60 countries attended the four-day event. I had no idea what it would be like but it was quite extraordinary.

The representations, whether keynote or parallel, were terrific. I drove back to the coast each night buzzing with ideas and a keenness to write and read new things. Good food, good conversations and exciting new connections.

 

Thank you Dr Libby Limbrick and Rosemary Tisdall, and your visionary team, both locally and from IBBY, for creating such an astonishing event. You both deserve a huge round of applause from our nation of readers. We are in your debt. Thank you. You are stars.

 

In his opening address, IBBY President, Wally De Doncker talked about the aims of the organisation in view of human rights and common goals. He said New Zealand had a fine record in terms of gender but there were areas of concern such as our immigration policies. Some delegates were refused entry into New Zealand for the Congress. This also happens with some writers invited to our literary festivals. What can we do about this?

The graphics were sublime.

 

I didn’t get to everything but here are some selected highlights for me (one regret was I couldn’t see Leigh Hobbs, the Australian Children’s Laureate).

 

1   The key note session included  Joy Cowley, Kate De Goldi and Witi Ihimaera and the combination was genius.

Joy Cowley talked about the way her country never appeared in her early reading. Children saw themselves in the School Journal but that was not a book. Three decades later, it had become a passion for Joy that children could see themselves in the books they read. I was delighted to hear Joy say that children’s literature is no longer an occupation for those who have failed at ‘real writing.’ I still see an unfortunate hierarchy here (we have no Children’s Laureate, children’s books get less reviewed, no Prime Minister’s Award, less time on the stage at festivals talking to adults for a start) but the Congress underlined the vitality of heart and thinking on an international scale. I particularly liked the way Joy challenged us: ‘to pause and remember a time in your childhood when you felt you could do anything — keep that inner child along with the learned adult. I first thought we aged like apples, grew ripe, wrinkled and fell off the tree, but I think we grow like onions adding layers.

Kate De Goldi asked if there is room for nuanced, contemplative writing for the middle reader – writing that is both meditative and intellectually playful. Kate talked about running her way into a new project with Gecko Press: an annual for children that will be out later this year. She interviewed her eleven-year-old self to find out what is needed. The annual is based on commission rather than submission with many adult writers (James Brown, Jenny Bornholdt) invited to produce work according to a governing idea. I like the way there is a desire to open different realities, different forms, adventures. I came away wondering what an eleven-year-old child in 2016 will stick to like glue.

Witi Ihimaera talked about the genesis of The Whale Rider and the importance of family. I didn’t make notes and wanted to push replay when he finished talking. It felt like he had soothed us into the comfort and necessity of storytelling and then pricked that state of comfort with provocative questions for a world ill at ease. Galvanising for those of us who write and read within a state of privilege.

 

2  A kapa-haka group from Mainfreight School in Auckland. Magnificent.

 

3   There is No Such Thing as a Children’s Book: Kate De Goldi with Leonard Marcus and Julia Eccleshare.

Marcus was a remedial reader but his break through moment was poetry. “Why don’t you write that poem for me and then read it to me?’ he was asked. Poetry was his way into reading! I am constantly harping on about the way poetry is a tool of liberation for children.

Kate juxtaposed two questions: ‘Is there usefulness?’ as opposed to ‘Is there play?’ In my view, poetry is first and foremost the playground for children writing and reading.

Julia juxtaposed ‘commentators’ talk’ as opposed to ‘writers talking.’ And this gold nugget: You don’t read, as a child reader, a children’s book for what adult critics say you are reading it for.’

Julia also asked if children’s authors are disrespected by adult authors. She suggested Philip Pullman gave children’s literature intellectual respectability and JK Rowling gave financial viability. And on the reading reward: ‘if you read Tom’s Midnight Garden, the whole of life is in there.’

Tellingly from Julia: In the past, children’s authors wrote the book they wanted to write with time and authorial autonomy but it is not like that now. She added, ‘it takes time to nurture authors and reach the classic book. Now the ink is hardly dry from the publisher’s pen and the book is out.’

Kate provocatively said she had found the YA form interesting and mysterious but now she loathes it.

Julia said the YA market has lost true commitment to the young reader. She said the central place from which you tell a story makes it different from adult books. You get a view of the world from a child’s eye.

Marcus could understand the teenage love of dystopian fiction because they have a sense of adults no longer able to control things in the world.

Julia is most gleeful about the book she picks up that sweeps her away (one in 10,000) and for Marcus, graphic novels.

 

4. Cultural Diversity in Children’s Literature: Nadia Wheatley, Gavin Bishop, Nahoko Uehashi.

This was a standout session for me but sadly the speaker before borrowed over 20 minutes of their time slot. It was fascinating hearing the stories behind some of Gavin Bishop’s stories and the way he provided books that are a kind of mirror. His show and tell was a direct response to his Māori ancestry and his Pākehā upbringing.

Nahoko was a revelation. She spoke briefly in English and then a translator  read an English version of her presentation. Nahoko accompanied it with sign gestures. She began by saying she has only ever worn a kimono twice, loves Japanese food but also Korean BBQ and pasta. No one questions her Japanese identity. Here are some bits I gleaned from her talk that sent me in search of her books:

Outside Japan, I am an exotic minority  – I wanted to write a book that could only be written by a Japanese writer.

I am swept along by a torrent or words – if readers find a trace of Japan it is because my unconscious is permeated with Japanese.

We are not left forever divided – one element that allows us to understand each other is story.

I am Japanese but can become a Celtic slave. I can live within a book penned by an English woman.

The ultimate proof we can all understand one another is we can all share stories.

No person is truly free from cultural limitations. We can reach out and grasp each other’s hand. Stories empower us to do this. Stories empower us, creatures of imagination, to become others.

Nadia was also a revelation. Like others I raced down to buy a copy of Flight but it had sold out. My copy is now on order!

 

5. Identity in YA Literature

With her IBBY Honour Book acknowledged at the festival, Mandy Hager was a standout for me: ‘Stories are a safe way to explore things.’ ‘Participants walk along with the protagonist.’ ‘You must do things you think you cannot do.’ I was disappointed not to see her book in the Penguin Random House stall.

 

6. Imagination in an Age of Reason: Julia Eccleshare with Kate De Goldi, Ursula Dubosarsky and Kathleen Paterson.

Julia suggested we need to keep imaginative literature alive and flourishing if we want to keep children readers. She asked the panelists to name a talismanic book for them (Kate, Harry the Dirty Dog and Katherine, The Secret Garden).

I loved Ursula’s claim that you need to keep somethings completely secret from the reader; things that give you the energy to write the book.

Kate: I can only set books in Christchurch.

Ursula: I don’t describe in my books.

Katherine: I have done very little describing of Terabithia. Children do their own describing.

Ursula: Children are quite happy with a state of unknowledge.

Katherine: Children tell you things about your book you didn’t know.

Kate: I have burglarised though disguised my family’s lives. I can do a male POV but never try to inhabit another ethnicity or culture.

Katherine: When I was first learning to write and I was an adult it was ‘write what you know’ but I didn’t know anything.

Katherine: Movie people couldn’t believe money wouldn’t buy a sequel to Bridge to Terabithia.

 

7 Verse and a Diverse World

I was in this session but came away with a long list of YA novels in verse I am itching to read. Chris Crowe from USA talked about the genesis of his verse novel, Death Coming Up the Hill, and it was riveting. He spoke about how a story he thought was really badly written was transformed by his love of the number 17, some mathematical equations and a sequence of haiku. He gave me a copy so I can speak further on this.

 

8  Marcus Zusak

Marcus stood on stage and told a long knotty snaky personal story on how The Book Thief came to life. Then read from a new novel,’Bridge of Clay,’ he has been working from. His storytelling started with the family anecdote of the alarm clock where his dad smashed Marcus’s beloved clock on the floor because the alarm went off in the middle of the night. Marcus was in the lounge hoping to watch Christmas cartoons (he was obsessed with them!).

After reading the new extract, Marcus returned to the image of the alarm clock: ‘As writers we are always digging things up. I am always back in the bedroom picking up the pieces of the alarm clock and realise it is still ticking.’ Wonderful.

 

9  The Hans Christian Anderson Awards Dinner at Shed 10

Every two years this award is given to a writer and to an illustrator.

This year: Cao Wenxuan (China) and Rotraut Susanne Berner (Germany)

Susanne sent an animation from Germany as she could not be there and Cao made a glorious speech in Chinese with an English translation beautifully inscribed on the screen. I had read and loved his  book, Bronze and Sunflower, over summer,so it was very special to hear his speech.

Here is a sample of favourite bits:

I can’t sacrifice my life experience to make children happy.

Literature is another form of house building.

Certainly it should not be any empty house.

I no longer use clay, twigs or building blocks. Instead I use words.

On some occasions, I feel like a bird with its wings clipped of but at least I can go back to my house of words and have a rest.

Writing comforts our hearts which are consistently beating for freedom.

 

National Poetry Day: from today Havelock North pops out poetry – cool idea

Havelock North

Pop out poetry
Poems will be let loose throughout the Hastings District Libraries to celebrate NZ Poetry Day and Havelock North is in on the action. Poetry will pop out of the collections the week of 22-26 August; anywhere from sports to general fiction. You could spot them anywhere!
Entry Details: Free. All ages.
Date/Times: Mon 22 August – Fri 26 August, 9am – 6pm
Locations: Havelock North Library, 30 Te Mata Road, Havelock North
Contact: libraries@hdc.govt.nz
Further Info

 

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National Poetry Day in Wellington: Mākaro Press does parks and buckets

 

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Poets in the Park
A panoply of poets perform their work for passersby and prescient perchers. Bring a packed or purchased lunch to hear poets of Mākaro Press and Steele Roberts, whose offices peek over the park. Come and hear: Harvey Molloy • Kerry Popplewell • Tim Jones • Maggie Rainey-Smith • Keith Westwater • Pete Carter • Robyn Cooper • Peter Stuart • Stefanie Lash • Polina Kouzminova • Jamie Trower.
Entry Details: Free. Open to all ages.
Date/Times: 26 August, 12-1.15pm
Location: Glover Park, Ghuznee Street, Wellington city.
Contact: makaropress@gmail.com

Buckets of Poets
Poets busk their poems beside the ebullient bucket fountain of Cuba Mall. Bring your lunch and be prepared to be blown away by the poets of Mākaro Press and Steele Roberts, whose offices are in the Cuba precinct. Come and hear: Harvey Molloy • Kerry Popplewell • Tim Jones • Maggie Rainey-Smith • Keith Westwater • Pete Carter • Robyn Cooper • Peter Stuart • Stefanie Lash • Polina Kouzminova • Jamie Trower.
Entry Details: Free. Open to all ages.
Date/Times: 26 August, 2-3.15pm
Location: The bucket fountain, Cuba Mall, Wellington.
Contact: makaropress@gmail.com

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National Poetry Day in Wellington: next up Unity Books and it looks very good indeed

 

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Six Poets In Sixty Minutes
Celebrate National Poetry Day by heading to Unity Books to listen to Hera Lindsay Bird, Harvey Molloy, Bill Nelson, Rachel O’Neill, Kerrin P Sharpe and Tim Upperton read from their work.
Entry Details: Free. Open to all ages.
Date/Times: Friday 26 August, 1-2pm
Location: Unity Books, 57 Willis Street, Wellington
Contact: Dylan Sherwood wellington@unitybooks.co.nz

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National Poetry Day in the Herald: some thoughts, a favourite poem and ten poems that have stuck to me

The NZ Herald invited to share some thoughts on poetry for National Poetry Day. Here is my contribution in full, including a favourite poem and a list of poems that have stuck to me.

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Paula with Courtney Sina Meredith’s fabulous Tail of the Taniwha

 

Josephine likes lyric poetry

 

Josephine likes the way a poet will pull in a bird or a ladder

or an old coat and the bird and the ladder and the old coat

will tremble and shiver and ebb and flow just like the sea

so you will fall upon the fullness of each and it will make

you shift on your chair and almost stop breathing.

 

From New York Pocket Book Seraph Press, 2016

 

 

Poetry is a form of music. There are no rules you can’t break. Poems can tell stories, make lists, leave things out, share secrets, make things up, confess things, protest in a loud voice. A good poem can take you out in the world and turn you upside down so everything looks different. It can push you down a steep slope that is really exhilarating or put you in front of something strange or wonderful so you just have to stop and linger as though you are in a bush clearing or on an unfamiliar street or peeking through a door ajar. Sometime the hairs on the back of your arm might stand on end, especially when you hear a good poem read out loud (Bill Manhire, Michele Leggott, David Eggleton). Good poems can sometimes misbehave (Hera Lindsay Bird) or make you suck your cheeks in because they tang with life (Emma Neale) or make you swop shoes (Sarah Jane Barnett, Anna Jackson, Helen Rickerby). We don’t have to get everything in a poem. A good poem is where a poet takes shoes and socks off and stands in a southern stream in the middle of winter. Anything is possible. Some poems don’t suit us and some poems are a match made in heaven (Tusiata Avia, Bernadette Hall, Joan Fleming, Ian Wedde, Chris Price, Gregory O’Brien, Murray Edmond, Elizabeth Smither, Steven Toussaint).

 

 

A favourite poem

I love Rachel Bush’s ‘Sing Them’ because she is singing out of near death, unfolding lines until they ‘float,’ and there is love and memory, even at ‘the cold leftover end/ of the rind of winter,’ and I feel sad as I read but she lets the world shine and each phrase is extraordinary.

 

 

Ten New Zealand poems that have stuck to me (sticky poems)

Jenny Bornholdt ‘The Rocky Shore’

James Brown ‘The Bicycle’

Anne Kennedy ‘Sing-Song’

Michele Leggott ‘Blue Irises’

Margaret Mahy ‘Down the Back of the Chair’

Bill Manhire ‘Hotel Emergencies’

Selina Tusitala Marsh ‘Fast Talking PI’

Cilla McQueen ‘Being Here’

CK Stead ‘Auckland’

Hone Tuwhare ‘Rain’

 

 

 

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Best Books I never wrote – Mahy Manhire, Neale and McQueen

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To celebrate my new poetry collection, Fairfax invited me to share some book titles for their regional papers. It is very fitting the weekend I am at the glorious IBBY Congress in Auckland, my first pick is by Margaret Mahy.

 

The Lion in the Meadow, Margaret Mahy

No matter what I write, Margaret Mahy’s fiendishly elastic, daringly inventive way with words is like my phantom grandmother. Take a lion, a matchbox, a boy and a mum and you get a classic story to which New Zealander writers are all in debt. The ending is genius and still gives me goosebumps.

 

for the other three  … see here

Poetry Day Wellington: second up – The National Library

Poetry Day at the National Library

  • Date: Friday, 26 August, 2016
  • Time: 12.10pm – 1.00pm
  • Cost: Free
  • Location: Te Ahumairangi (ground floor), National Library, corner Molesworth and Aitken Streets
  • Contact Details: For more information, email Peter.Ireland@dia.govt.nz

Poetry at its best with Wellington poets Anna Jackson, Magnolia Wilson, Ashleigh Young, James Brown and John Dennison in a lunchtime reading at the National Library.

The poets will read their own work and poems by poets they like. Bring your lunch if you wish, and be early for a good seat.

 

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August Challenge on Poetry Box – telling little poem stories

Poems that tell little stories can be really fun to read. Your challenge this month is to write a story poem. It can be really short or medium.

Here are some tips for you:

 

Use something that happened to you or someone you know as a starting point.

You don’t have to tell the whole story! Tell the bits that interest or fascinate you.

You can keep it real or add a dollop of imagination. Or do more than one version.

 

Retell a story from a book you have read

You might keep bits the same and you might add your own twists but you will have to miss things out – it is a poem after all.

 

Retell a myth or legend

Which bits matter and need to be in your poem? You might write from the point of view of one of the characters.

 

Take a book title as a starting point for your poem and then write your own story poem.

 

Take a newspaper headline as a starting point and then write your own story poem.

 

Take a favourite character from a story you like and invent a little poem story for them.

What changes about them?

 

What changes in your story poem?

Is there a surprise? There doesn’t have to be!

 

Try different beginnings and endings.

 

h a v e     f u  n     ! * ! *!

 

SEND your poem to paulajoygreen@gmail.com

DEADLINE Saturday August 27th

Include your name, age, year and name of school. You can include your teacher’s email if you like.

P l e a s e    p u t   ‘Story poem’ in the subject line of your email.

I will pick some favourites to post on the blog and have a book for at least one reader and maybe even a book for a class.

I will post on Wednesday August 31st.

Gecko Press Books always put a smile on my face: three new books did just that!

One GOOD book can spark a lifetime of reading

When I get a bundle of books from Gecko Press, they are wrapped in tissue paper and sealed with a little sticker. Such a treat to open.

They are ALWAYS good to hold. I love watching TV and walking on the beach and riding my bike but having a good book in your hand is such a GOOD feeling.

It’s like sitting in front of a cracklingly GOOD fire when outside it is thunder and rain and hail which seems to be just about every day in Auckland this winter.

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Gus’s Garage by Leo Timmers

There is a lot going on the big bright illustrations because Gus is a very busy pig.

He loves to store things which could be a disaster but is actually very GOOD.

When you need something you head straight to Gus for help!

I especially love what Gus does for the very chilly giraffe

and the very hot walrus

and the extra hot penguin.

This is a very GOOD and very busy picture book! And I just loved it.

 

 

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Life According to Dani by Rose Lagercrantz, illustrations by Eva Eriksson

 

I have reviewed the other Dani chapter books on the blog. Gorgeous black & white illustrations. They are simple and catch the characters and the moods beautifully.

At the start of the book two surprising things happen. Dani rescues worms from the road so they don’t get run over. Dan’s dad gets run over and ends up in hospital for a few months. So Dani gets to spend the summer with her best friend Ella on an island. She misses her dad and her home but she has fun.

On the day her dad doesn’t call and Dani gets worried, Ella gets her making a BAKING BOOK.

My favourite funny bit: Ella is supposed to be practicing her violin. Instead she and Dani go skinny dipping in the sea and she plays her violin there. They get caught out!

My favourite secret: (shsh, I can’t tell) except Dani thinks it’s a terrible catastrophe.

This book makes you feel a bit SAD then it makes you feel warm and cosy and GOOD inside. Check it out!

 

 

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Yours Sincerely, Giraffe by Megumi Iwasa, illustrated by Jun Takabatake

The drawings in this book are like ink drawings and they are so cool they make me want to pick up a pen and draw something. Maybe I will!

This book, Giraffe says, is for people who are bored or who are busy and need a wee break.

Giraffe has everything he needs except: an extra special friend.

Giraffe is extra bored UNTIL a a very GOOD question turns up!

What is on the other side of the horizon?

He decides to write a letter to send with the brand new PELICAN mail service.

 

Giraffe gets to be penfriends with a penguin. The penguin doesn’t know what a giraffe looks like and the giraffe doesn’t know what a penguin looks like which makes the story zip and spark.

My favourite bit: when the giraffe dresses up to look like a penguin and doesn’t quite get it right.

The sentences in this book are extra scrumptious.

This is also a GOOD feeling book because it is all about friendship.

 

 

Sometimes you just need  a big dose of GOOD feelings and that’s what GECKO books can do for you (especially when it is hail and wind and thunder and rain outside).

 

Dear Gecko Books

Thank you for a very GOOD reading day.

from Paula Green x

Don’t forget to check out Toitoi: A Journal for Young Writers and Artists

 

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You can go Toitoi website here

Submissions for next issue close on September 23, 2016

You can submit writing but you can also send in sample illustrations if you would like to illustrate a poem or story by someone else.

It is open to children aged 5 to 13.

 

The editors especially like: poems and stories that reflect culture and experience in New Zealand.

 

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My favourite poems that M o V e

Thanks for the poems that move. So many different ideas and moods and rhythms. I loved reading them all. There are so many ways to make words move in poems. I have to take screen shots if your poems are set out differently in case you are wondering.

If I didn’t pick you this time do try my challenge tomorrow.

I am sending a copy of The Letter Box Cat to Scarlett.

 

Emily sent me an poem that I couldn’t open and couldn’t reply to. If you read this – resend!

 

Skimming Stones

Plop

Plop

Plop

Skip plop!

Plop

Skip    skip    plop!

Plop

Skip    plop

Skip    skip     skip     plop!

Skip    skip     skip     skip     skip     skip     PLOP!

Clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap clap!

 Gemma  Age 10  Year 6, Adventure School

 

 

 

 

 

Pickle Cat

Pickle cat chases the mouse,

Pickle cat goes round the house.

Pickle cat sleeps all day,

Pickle cat wants to play!

Pickle cat starts to growl,

Pickle cat stops and meows.

Pickle cat goes round the corner,

Pickle cat hops in the sauna!

Pickle cat goes to bed,

as he counts the sheep above his head!

Scarlett H Chelsea Primary School. I am a year 4 and I am 8 years old.

 

 

My Fast Friend

My Friend Zaine

Is a brilliant runner

When the starting gun sounds

He races off like a bullet

 

He goes

Faster

And faster

And faster and faster

And faster and faster and faster

And faster and faster and faster and faster

Andfasterandfasterandfasterandfasterandfaster

Andfasterandfasterandfasterandfasterandfasterandfaster…

 

Until all I can see is a blazing trail of white-hot fire

Daniel L Age 7, Year 3, Adventure School

 

 

Autumn

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From Emma age  11  Churton Park School and I am year 6

 

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By Matthew  age 11 Churton Park School  In year 6

 

Eagle

ascends
The Eagle
Swift as a plane
Soaring overhead
Gliding
Down
To catch his prey
Hovering overhead
D
I
V
I
N
G
down
Swoops  a  w  a  y
With the prey

By Caiden S

 

Mushrooms

Sitting in the dark sky

watching the stars

fade and appear

and the moon

move in a circle.

They sit there

and chat

until we come.

The mushrooms move

when we are not looking.

 

By: William S Age: 8 years Year: 4 School: St Andrews College, Christchurch

 

Ice

Sitting, frozen upon the jars and tins,

A little cube of ice,

Chattering, frozen, always cold,

Between his friends in the mould.

 

What is happening to the poor thing?

Oh no, it’s out in the sun,

Careful, or it will melt!

Slowly changing form,

Ready to start life again.

 

These days it’s different,

It’s not ice,

It something else that is quite nice,

It now sits in a jug, gurgling,

It is… water!

 

Zoe G Yr 6 St Cuthbert’s College

 

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 Josh 10 years of age and I attend St Andrews college In Christchurch

 

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 Chelsea J Age: 11 (Year 6)  St Andrews College

Poetry Box July challenge: move p o e m move!

Special note: I won’t open any attachments or links if you don’t include your details of name and school etc. I keep getting poems like sent like this but I don’t want to risk a virus. Put the poem challenge title in the subject line.

 

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This month I am giving two challenges. One for younger children and one for older children but you can do either or both! This is a challenge about movement as I love the way poems move!

Movement in a poem can make a poem spark or kick or jiggle.

 

A challenge for younger children (or older!):

 

Write a poem about something that moves.

Hunt for good verbs before you start writing.

Verbs will be the gold nuggets in your poem.

Listen to your poem when you read it aloud

The number of words you put on the line will change the way the poem moves!

 

 

A challenge for older children (or younger!):

 

Write a poem that changes in some way.

Perhaps the rhythm changes.

Or how you see something.

Or what happens to something or someone.

A change in a poem can be a surprise.

It might change the mood of a poem.

Don’t forget to use your ears and listen to the flow.

Don’t forget to use strong detail.

Real detail helps your poem glow.

Collect strong detail (nouns, verbs, adjectives) before you start writing.

 

An Extra challenge:

Try making a picture poem that shows movement!

 

SEND your poem to paulajoygreen@gmail.com

DEADLINE Thursday July 28th

Include your name, age, year and name of school. You can include your teacher’s email if you like.

P l e a s e    p u t   ‘Movement poem’ in the subject line of your email.

I will pick some favourites to post on the blog and have a book for at least one reader and maybe even a book for a class.

I will post on Sunday July 31st.