Sophie’s cat poem made the hairs on my arm prickle!

Sophie has sent in this cat poem which I love. It has a great rhythm and mood and words on the end of the line that shine out. Plus ‘glowed’ and ‘glared’ work so well together. I really like the way this poem catches a moment. Oh great job Sophie!

Cat Poem

He came into our garden last night
Hidden in the blackest shadows
Briskly padded along the fence
And then stopped
Yellow eyes glowed and glared
Then disappeared in the dark
As if he had never come

 

Sophie W,  Year 6,  Eastern Hutt School

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