Holiday poetry bonanza: Liadan’s flying

This is the first poem Liadan has sent Poetry Box. I really like the last line. It put a smile on my face. This poem shows how some of the best poems are actually very simple! I enjoyed reading it thank you.

Flying

I am soaring
I am flying
Flying through the air
Wind rushes past me
I hear the sound of pouring rain
Luckily I’m above it

 

by Liadan, age 9, Discovery 1 School in Halswell Christchurch

 

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