Holiday Poem Camp: Ewen has a hot summer ice cream just for you!

Ewen has taken up my challenge to write a poem ice cream. She has played with the words on the line and ended with a very tasty poem indeed. When she sent it to me the second half of the poem was the colour of a cone which was really cool, but I haven’t managed to use colour on WordPress yet. Is it possible? Sometimes it is a real challenge getting the poem to look right on the screen. Maybe there is a better host to blog poems. Anyway great job Ewen!

A Hot Summer Ice Cream
frozen cream
oozy and sweet
summery it may seem
with such a boiling heat.
The weather hot with blue sky
the sun shining bright
finger licking good
a lick is
in my


Ewen aged 11, Year 6, Fendalton Open Air Primary School, Christchurch

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