Wow! Hannah’s murky bog is STUNNING (she’s in Year 4)

I was so delighted when Hannah sent me this piece of writing. Hannah is in Year 4 and goes to Redcliffs School in Christchurch. Thanks to the New Zealand book Council I got to visit this splendid school last year.

I love the way Hannah has worked at editing her piece. It is full of EYE catching detail, juicy words, dancing similes. This piece of writing is a JOY to read.  Thank you Hannah! I have read it SEVEN times so far.

 

 

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4 thoughts on “Wow! Hannah’s murky bog is STUNNING (she’s in Year 4)

  1. Paula Green Post author

    Poet Marty Smith told me this: Hannah’s writing is so vivid and fresh that I feel bait red-faced myself, and then quietly relieved by the sunlight on fire. I also really love the cruel laughter of the gulls, because that’s exactly how they laugh.

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  2. room 6, redcliffs school

    Room 6, Hannah’s class would like to say
    “you are such an amazing writer, we’re blown away, it’s like a famous person has written it, you might become a famous author…..Your two teachers and classmates are so proud of you…”

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