My sea poem inspired a young class at Ormond School to do their own sea poems. Wonderful!

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My sea poem inspired sea poems from Ormond School in Gisborne.

You can read my poem here.

I loved their poems so much I have picked a few to post here. Thanks for sharing.

 

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    Wave

    A calm beach

    with a blue sea

    behind it

    and behind it

    is a horizon

    with black sand

    Tom

     

    Waves

    The waves are

    very cold

    and they are

    made of ice

    they are

    ice waves

    Ben A

     

    Frozen Waves

    The waves are big

    and they are frozen

    and it looks like

    a hill

    some of them

    moving

    it is very cold

    because it is icy

    Ruby-rhain

     

    Frozen Wave

    The frozen wave

    is like a tunnel

    it’s still

    and calm

    the white water

    is moving slowly

    on the beach

    Noah

     

    Wave

    Giant wave

    was icy

    and it was sticky

    it looked like

    marshmallows

    Myles

     

    Waves

    The waves

    look like

    skateboard ramps

    slowly falling over

    the sea

    wrinkled hills

    it is slushy

    Kyran

     

    Fresh waves

    The frozen, icy

    fresh wave

    looks just like

    a slushy sea

    moving in the

    fresh wave

    and it looks

    all calm

    in a sparkling sea

    Sequoia

     

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