July Poetry Box challenge: Some favourite poems using Groovy Fish titles

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Wow! It has taken me a long time to read all the poems you sent using titles from my new book Groovy Fish.

So as you can imagine it was hard choosing.  I do hope you get to read these and hunt for one that inspires you to write a poem.

None of the poems were like my poems in Groovy Fish and I loved that –  if you find my book write me a letter and tell me what you think of it and I will post some on the blog (paulajoygreen@gmail.com).

I loved all the poems that came in from students at Rātā Street School so I am sending them a copy of Groovy Fish.

This is not a competition but I am giving away three of my original drawings. I put all the names in a hat and I sending Groovy Fish illustrations to Sam (Otari School),  Tom (Hoon Hay School – Te Kura Koaka) and Mady (Rātā Street School).

Do try my August challenge I will post tomorrow.

I loved all the poems and I hope you don’t feel sad you didn’t get picked this time but glad you had such fun writing it. My philosophy when I write books that don’t get picked!!

 

 

Lollipops and Chickenpox

 

The chickens have chickenpox

and big boxes on their heads.

 

Dr Loudbutton gives the chickens lollipops,

pumpkinseed flavour, boring flavour,

 

spider flavour, dirt flavour.

The chickens swell up!

 

‘Those chickens are going crazy

for lollipops,’ says Dr Loudbutton.

 

Brroock! Brroock! Brroock!

 

Sam Rastall, 8, year 3, Otari School

The Watermelon

I saw a watermelon going to the Moon on the road yesterday
Now, I see a tiny little resort
With a cool pool
On the Moon.
NASA says “a round green alien lives on the Moon”.

Ben E  Age: 7   St. Andrew’s College

 

The Biscuit Thief

One day at a house Alyssa baked some
Biscuits! But a thief came he
Was as quiet as a mouse
Dancing past the window
He has two pockets
Ready to steal yummy biscuits!
So be careful.

Olivia Age 8, Y4   Fendalton Open Air School

 

The seven seagulls

 

7 hungry seagulls waiting at the beach,

7 hungry seagulls looking at a peach.

7 hungry seagulls need some yummy lunch,

7 hungry seagulls want to munch and crunch.

7 hungry seagulls flying to the food,

7 hungry seagulls are in a good mood.

7 hungry seagulls sitting at the beach,

7 hungry seagulls have eaten up the peach.

 

Alicia (7) & Rosie (7) – Yr 3 – Rātā Street School

 

 

The Biscuit Thief

One midnight
when the moon shines
as bright as the sun,
one little racoon
lifts a kitchen window,
opens the pantry door,
knocks over the biscuit jar,
pushes it down to the floor,
sweeps away the glass,
picks up the vanilla biscuits,
balances them on his back,
and returns to his cubs.

Tom Age 10, Year 6  Hoon Hay School – Te Kura Koaka

 

Midnight

I shine on the pier
At New Brighton Beach
Feeling the wind
Whipping my cheeks.
The busy streets of the UK
Beeping cars, Big Ben chiming,
But that wouldn’t be my perfect night
So the next night I go to
Papua New Guinea
I see rainforests and lots of things to do
I see humans alone with the animals disappeared
Although I’m just one moon,
Can’t I reach out and help them?
I have been to a million places.
What place is my favourite?
No one knows the answer.
Not even a fairy,
Or even a dancer…..?

Ameila, Selwyn House School

 

The Tree House

 

Soon I am moving to a new house

I’m going to live in a tree house

 

My tree house will be a serene lookout tower

Accessed by a cauldron pulley

High in the branches of a Kahikatea tree

Looking out over smooth grassy fields

Like American prairies

And a vast swampland

Like the Florida Everglades

 

My tree house will be made from nature

Living there will feel like being part of the tree

It will be a sanctuary for tired birds

Like a giant nest we can all share

It will be hiding place for cheeky boys

A place to refresh feelings

Like a day spa for ten year olds

 

Soon I am moving to a new house

I’m going to live in a tree house…

 

You can visit any time

 

Daniel L, age 10, Y6, Adventure School

 

Zip Zap Zang

Zip zap zang I flipped when I ran,
I twisted i wished when i was a sizzle pan.
I saw a dancing potato when I said malaaawaloooo.
I said zang wang when I hooked up a man.
I saw a strawberry eating a pizza,
but I saw a fridge licking a whiteboard pretending to be a duster!!!!
WHY IS THERE A TIGER SAYING ATOOOOOOOO AND TIGEROOOOO!!!

William   Age: 8 yrs  St Andrew’s College

 

Swimming With An Alien  

 

I swim across the wide ocean

with my friend the alien,

I feel faint as I look in to his eyes

red like fire

The water fills my lungs with happiness

as we glide through the cheerful water

My body freezes with delight

And now its time

to take flight

 

Violetta, Age : 10, Y6,  Fendalton School

 

Tea with Aunty Lee

Today I am having tea with Aunty Lee.
At Aunty Lee’s house I see a mouse.
I smile with glee.
It’s just me with Aunty Lee.
Aunty Lee says I must have cake with my tea.
At Aunty Lee’s I see a tree.
It has a bee looking at me.

Carolyn Age: 8  Year: 4 Fendalton School

 

The Glass Door

 

My heart melts as I see the emptiness within

A glass door with no beginning and no end

As I touch the substance it feels icy against my hand

The moon reflects against the surface

During the day there are two suns

If something heavy lands the door will shatter

 

Johanna Age 10, Year 6, Fendalton School

 

Dancing Fish

Yesterday I was out swimming and I saw something quite peculiar
There was a group of fish springing out of the water, and I didn’t
Know what they were doing so I swam over and asked what on earth
Are you doing, the leader of the group did this some sort of twirl over to me
And said, “what do you think we are doing we are dancing.” That fish had quite
Attitude. I said well it doesn’t look like dancing to me. So I’ll give you a quick
Lesson on how to dance. I taught them how to turn, leap and plié, it took quite a while for them to get it but when we did we started making up a dance. While they were practising I Raced back home and made some costumes, I made bright coloured sequens tops for the Fish. They loved the costumes. After the rehearsal had finished we went and found an audience. We had Mermaids and dolphins and turtles and even starfishes. I counted them in, 5,6,5,6,7,8. The audience were wordless they had never seen dancing fish before. The fish were blushing with pride.

Samantha Age 12 Y8 Selwyn House

 

Banana Land

 

Everyone loves bananas!!

I love bananas and Alex does too.

Bananas are awesome.

They are yellow and they are yummy.

 

Jonti  (8) & Alex (8) Yr 3 – Rātā Street School

 
Zip zac zang

Zip zac zang went the tall power line.
Zip zac zang went the electrical car.
Zip zip zac zac zang zang went the tall power line and the electrical car.
Then someone said,zip zac zang.
Then the light went zip zac zang.
Then I said zip zac zang.
Zip zac zang said everyone.
What will come next?
Zip zac zang from everything.
Alex age 8, Y4, Fendalton School

 

Midnight

(Acrostic Poem)

 

Morning

In a dream.

Dozing

Nap

Ink eyes.

Good night sleep

Hiccups !!!

Time to wake up.

 

Kade (8) Yr 3 – Rātā Street School

 

 

 

The six rainbow rabbits

The six rainbow Rabbits have
Lots of bad habits.
They try to
Bounce on their squeaky rainbow beds
Until they fall off and hurt
Their heads.

Alyssa Age 8 Y4  Fendalton open-air school

The Highway Rat

The highway rat
wears a hat
that flips and flops in the breeze
His matted fur and tattered hide
is fully infested with fleas

Isaac age 9 Y4 Fendalton School

 

 

The Dog Climbed up the Curtain

 

The dog climbed up the curtain

The cat jumped on his head

They both fell howling backwards

And landed on the bed.

 

In the door walked owner Sam

With a frown upon her face

The curtains were ripped and torn apart

And all around the place.

 

Hamish & Jackson (7) Yr 3 – Rātā Street School

 

Howling Wolf

(A haiku)

 

Very spooky wolf

In the night you howl loudly

Like a large grey dog

 

Mady (8) Rātā Street School

 

 

Sky High

(Acrostic Poem)

 

Kite flying high in the sky.

Yikes it’s too high.

Helicopter flying in the sky.

I’m scared of flying up in the sky.

Grass floats to the sky.

Hectic flight.

 

Tamaia (8) – Rātā Street School

 

 

Six Rainbow Rabbits

 

Up in the hills,

In the valley of sheep

 

Six rainbow rabbits,

Hidden away, fast asleep

 

On waking, they make rainbows of joy

Busy on the vast slopes that are far too steep

 

Saskia 7 years old St Andrew’s Preparatory

 

 

 

2 thoughts on “July Poetry Box challenge: Some favourite poems using Groovy Fish titles

  1. Fleur Coleman

    What a lot of talented children! I do like the imagery in Olivia’s ‘Biscuit thief’ – ‘he has two pockets’ it made me stop and wonder at the thief, the thief who appeared in my head while reading, had a brown overcoat with pockets like those of a lab coat. The seagulls at Mulberry Grove School where I used to teach were relentless optimists when thinking about stealing the lunch of our students, so your poem made me smile Alicia and Rose. Oh but Joanna’s ‘Glass door’ froze me from within, I felt like I was visiting the Ice Queen, creepy! Thank-you for sharing 😉

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